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scottobearThe room is small ...a studio apartment with one room, save for a miniscule bathroom, and an even more tiny closet. Real and simulated wood covers the walls, paneling that went out of style in the mid 1970's sometime... tan window shades. Brown industrial short carpet on the floor, only the portals to elsewhere are colored differently; brushed metal aluminum leading to the outside and the ones painted white boxing off the earlier mentioned indoor spaces. Earthy colors abound, light brown and gold formica on the floor of the bathroom, a deep chocolate mini fridge and a mid-tone dresser. Even the tiny microwave oven has a wood-grain print on it...It is obvious that a man, possibly a student lives there, as none of the colors quite match and have made the place take on a feeling of a dormitory.
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Date: 2001-05-07 08:08 am (UTC)Hope you don't mind if I note the disparity in verb tense when you talk about the portals...
(Actually, I wonder if this might be even more interesting described in present tense... allowing the reader to be there, rather than just hear about it... just a thought)
Look forward to reading more!
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Date: 2001-05-07 08:10 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2001-05-07 04:19 pm (UTC)Re:
Date: 2001-05-07 05:41 pm (UTC)Now to add... :)
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Date: 2001-05-08 03:13 am (UTC)