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[scottobear]

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[garebear18.livejournal.com]

Since when did Live Journal become a place for artsy fartsy poetry? Why are you doing this to yourself? How long did it take your 3 year old sister to draw the pathetic excuse for a picture you decided to use? I don't know what to say are you 13? This sounds like middle school poetry, I'm sorry you suck so much.

Hi Gar!

[scottobear.livejournal.com]

Welcome to my Journal! You have the distinction of being the first negative statement by a non-anonymous poster. I'm happy to reply to your questions.

Live journal is a place to do whatever you please in your own diary-type setting, and a great number of people do enjoy putting poetry in there... I took the liberty of looking in your journal, and had no religious experience reading yours... Rambling notes, and whining/repeating about the dearth of under 21 clubs, and getting drunk is your vibe, posting what I do is mine. My advice to you is that if you don't see anything you like, smack that button marked random again.

There are a number of folks out there who share your interests, and I've got plenty of friends already.

I use live journal because it does what it does so well. I can post whenever I want, about whatever I want from wherever I want to connect to the net. Mighty useful stuff... I'd think that would be self-evident.

It took me all of 2.5 minutes to generate the icon at stor.uk.co, and it seems to be very popular meme. You might want to look into it and also investigate the multiple icon feature too, that way you can post with more than one image.

I'm not 13, (unless you mistyped, and meant to type 31, in which case you're right on the money.)

Thank you for voicing your opinion on the above entry... you'd have a far better memory of 'middle school' (Back in my day, we called it junior high) than I would. In the future, I'd recommend trying constructive criticism, if you plan to point out flaws, perhaps you could offer a reasonable way to correcting them, or offer some worthwhile alternatives, otherwise, folks probably won't be as receptive to your seemingly irrational and mean-spirited outburst.

Regarding your opinion of me and your sorrow, don't sweat it. Your opinion doesn't mean a bit to me as you're nobody I know, let alone care about. Feel free to have the beliefs of your choice!

Some constructive thoughts for you...you might want to run your posts through a spell-check and grammar-check program... your sentence structure is not very strong, complex sentences don't seem to be your forte... perhaps restricting yourself to simple and compound types is a quick fix for now, until you investigate rules of usage more closely.

Cheers!

-Scotto

PS... Have you considered buying an account? The financial support of writers of your sort could greatly aid Brad's efforts to make LiveJournal grow! The cost of 1 case of beer is enough to give you a year's membership on the site, and the lack of alcohol might make your writing a trifle more coherent.

[ovariancyst.livejournal.com]

.....what a prick......

[sweetalyssm.livejournal.com]

Dear Retard,

While expressing one's opinion is certainly welcome in such a forum as LJ, your comment was nothing but pure malice, which I don't think is welcome anywhere.

I took the liberty to have a look at your journal to see if your comment merited any worth.

So...

I will say something that you understand.

Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck you...(sounds really stupid, doesn't it? Well what can you expect, right?)

Did you get that, Retard? Or did I leave out a fuck?

P.S. Why don't you come back when you're all grown up and have something other than your juvenile, teeny bopper angst to express.

Just a Question.....

[sweetalyssm.livejournal.com]

So, is

"fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck"

grown-up poetry?

You suck, Moron.

[tully-monster.livejournal.com]

Someone apparently forgot to take his happy pills today.

What the hell is it to you if someone decides to use his journal to write "artsy fartsy poetry?"

Don't you have homework to do, you budding young philistine?

(And do, by all means, go look up "philistine.")

=)

[shoo.livejournal.com]

*hugs* Scottobear...
looks like someone is jelous....and maybe needs to learn some manners.....or actually pick up a book and read it...;)

Re: =)

[scottobear.livejournal.com]

got it covered, Shoo! glad the blackout rolled away!
*hug*

oh my!

[meemee.livejournal.com]

you told him! you go boooiiiii!! hehehe

Re: oh my!

[scottobear.livejournal.com]

Thanks meemee!!!

*hug*

[nomi.livejournal.com]

go scotto :)

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[scottobear.livejournal.com]

thanks Nomi! :)

[soulstorage.livejournal.com]

Kill them with intelligence :) You said what needed to be said to someone in such a way that you never dirtied your playing field as he had. You responded with such words of confidence and wit that i bet you knocked that negative person on his immature lil keister! I added you as a friend because I think your writing is wonderful and so varied. This reply you made to this person was brilliant!

[ex-ilona40.livejournal.com]

You've made a new friend of me as well. Right on, brother.

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[scottobear.livejournal.com]

Thank you, very much! That's a wonderful and supportive thing for you to say. :)

[wild-mind.livejournal.com]

Woohoo!! lol.. gotta love a guy who can combat ignorance with such damn good grammar :) Good job!

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[scottobear.livejournal.com]

Hi Tonya! Thanks for the kind words, and stopping in!

[papoose.livejournal.com]

Scotto is my hero

*hugs*

[scottobear.livejournal.com]

You're a sweetheart too... good doggie!

*hug*

Bravo

[sweetalyssm.livejournal.com]

Your writing is thick was such detail and imagery, although the ending was a little disturbing--unexpected. Very Scotto....

Re: Bravo

[scottobear.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Chris. :)

You always have the nicest things to say!

*hug*

Yes!

[lianna.livejournal.com]

very impressive come-back scott. well written and right ON! sorry you had to waste even 1 minute on the ass though.

Re: Yes!

[scottobear.livejournal.com]

No sweat... I'm all warm-fuzzied by the huge response of all my friends!

Thank you!

[ldy.livejournal.com]

* gives you another grinning and well-deserved warm fuzzy *

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[scottobear.livejournal.com]

Thank you !!

always happy to get them!

[ginger]

well done...both the story and the rebuff!

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[scottobear.livejournal.com]

thanks! :) long time no see! :)

[inlovingmemory.livejournal.com]

Degenerates... all of you. Its people like you and your hypersensitivity that make this world such a god-awful place to live. I think its funny that a drunk 19 year old can get such a reaction out of a supposedly "mature" 31 year old. I can see you now... sniffling over you keyboard dictionary in hand, patting yourself on the back for being more articulate than someone half your age. Your "artsy fartsy" poetry bull shit is definitely pretty horrible... but thatDegenerates... all of you. Its people like you and your hypersensitivity that make this world such a god-awful place to live. I think its funny that a drunk 19 year old can get such a reaction out of a supposedly "mature" 31 year old. I can see you now... sniffling over you keyboard dictionary in hand, patting yourself on the back for being more articulate than someone half your age. Your "artsy fartsy" poetry bull shit is definitely pretty horrible... but that’s not what’s funny... what’s funny is that you chose to use the word "friends" when referring to all these blind idiots, who took your side merely because you used bigger words than gareth, you can all die. I think that just about sums it up... in closing... I think I'd like you see you dead and raped... to split you from crotch to Adams apple and to shove that "paper gown" of yours into your bowels while you scream in relentless agony. It would be bliss.

[diaryofahobbit.livejournal.com]

dear inlovingmemory,

here's a link you might find helpful:
dealing with anger (http://www.drmartytashman.com/cjc/cjc0108.htm)

hope this helps,
me